Pitch Live!
6:15 AM
Pitch Live!
Title: UNCOVERED
Genre: YA Sci-Fi Romance
Word Count: 62,000
I'm convinced that absolutely no one wants to spend hours listening to the sound of their own voice. Still, I did. =)
Life begins at the end of your comfort zone, right?
16 comments
Great pitch! I like your intro and ending to the video. If you could make it more conversational and less memorized-sounding, it would be perfect.
ReplyDeleteo0o0o0oh I love it! I would definitely read this. :-D (I have a weak spot for romantic sci-fi) Nice video and love the music choices!
ReplyDeleteI like it!! The opening was gorgeous, and the closing music was really nice. Good luck! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Lindsey,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your pitch video—I actually thought that it sounded quite natural and that you had a lot of enthusiasm in your voice. I love how you set up the premise (along with its twists and turns) and then end with some pretty big stakes for your MC. And I agree that the opening and closing segments really added a nice feel to it!
Good luck!
John Krissilas, #40
http://www.johnkrissilas.com/
I thought this was a good, solid pitch. Interesting elements in your story. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLove the opening and close. They caught my attention and kept me interested in listening to you. Well done.
ReplyDeleteRachel #5
Nice intro!
ReplyDeleteI liked the end of your pitch a lot, and the premise sounded intriguing. Good luck! #26
ReplyDeleteGood pitch! Lots of new alien words to learn, but you did a good job at defining everything. Very clear and concise. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your pitch and I love your comment 'life begins at the end of your comfort zone'. The idea of aliens... very cool.
ReplyDeleteEllie Heller #32
Wants to kiss him-then she wants to punch him, and he's an alien. Uh oh. Sounds fun. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a lot of fun. The alien mafia sounds like a pretty formidable enemy to have. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLife definitely begins at the end of your comfort zone. Congrats on coming out of your to create a great pitch! Good luck.
ReplyDeleteLOVE your pitch. I'm a huge YA sci fi fan. Hot aliens? Check. Alien Mafia? CHECK. A name of a group I can't spell? Check.
ReplyDeleteWELCOME to the agent round. Congrats!!!
I love that he's an alien... and she is too! (Sort of.) Congrats on advancing to the agent round!
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch! And, I've actually noticed quite a few agents looking for "alien" stories.
ReplyDeleteCongrats for moving on and good luck!
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