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Pitch Live!


Title: UNCOVERED
Genre: YA Sci-Fi Romance
Word Count: 62,000





I'm convinced that absolutely no one wants to spend hours listening to the sound of their own voice. Still, I did. =)

Life begins at the end of your comfort zone, right?

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16 comments

  1. Great pitch! I like your intro and ending to the video. If you could make it more conversational and less memorized-sounding, it would be perfect.

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  2. o0o0o0oh I love it! I would definitely read this. :-D (I have a weak spot for romantic sci-fi) Nice video and love the music choices!

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  3. I like it!! The opening was gorgeous, and the closing music was really nice. Good luck! :)

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  4. Hey Lindsey,

    I really liked your pitch video—I actually thought that it sounded quite natural and that you had a lot of enthusiasm in your voice. I love how you set up the premise (along with its twists and turns) and then end with some pretty big stakes for your MC. And I agree that the opening and closing segments really added a nice feel to it!

    Good luck!

    John Krissilas, #40
    http://www.johnkrissilas.com/

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  5. I thought this was a good, solid pitch. Interesting elements in your story. Good luck!

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  6. Love the opening and close. They caught my attention and kept me interested in listening to you. Well done.

    Rachel #5

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  7. I liked the end of your pitch a lot, and the premise sounded intriguing. Good luck! #26

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  8. Good pitch! Lots of new alien words to learn, but you did a good job at defining everything. Very clear and concise. Good job!

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  9. I enjoyed your pitch and I love your comment 'life begins at the end of your comfort zone'. The idea of aliens... very cool.

    Ellie Heller #32

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  10. Wants to kiss him-then she wants to punch him, and he's an alien. Uh oh. Sounds fun. Good Luck!

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  11. This sounds like a lot of fun. The alien mafia sounds like a pretty formidable enemy to have. Good luck!

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  12. Life definitely begins at the end of your comfort zone. Congrats on coming out of your to create a great pitch! Good luck.

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  13. LOVE your pitch. I'm a huge YA sci fi fan. Hot aliens? Check. Alien Mafia? CHECK. A name of a group I can't spell? Check.

    WELCOME to the agent round. Congrats!!!

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  14. I love that he's an alien... and she is too! (Sort of.) Congrats on advancing to the agent round!

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  15. Great pitch! And, I've actually noticed quite a few agents looking for "alien" stories.

    Congrats for moving on and good luck!

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